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It's ok. Keep at it.

Definitely belongs in a video game.

That's some high quality stuff right there. I feel the wobble saw that comes in at about a minute is a little rough sounding for the song. It just gets stronger throughout and feels out of place. Tried a little too much to make the song "go hard"

TeaCatOfficial responds:

Thanks, I strive to improve c:

Sounds like a pretty cookie cutter nightcore mix. Hints of NES sonic? Ah well it's appropriate for how things were 8 years ago.

Wow, this has some huge potential. The intro has such a natural flow that shouts HIT TRANCE VIBE. I really appreciate the collab with a singer. She's got a pretty nice voice, from what I can tell, but you sure did go heavy on those fx. There's a couple parts that could stand to be re-recorded though where it doesn't quite match up.
Note* At 5:50 I'd either let it ring out a bit longer, or have it cut faster the amount of time feels awkward.
Can't wait to hear it finished

JohnnyFrizz responds:

Thank you for the review my friend! I see what you are talking about at 5:50 I believe it's because the vocal doesn't fall in time quite right so it feels off. Indeed we need to re-record some bits :)

I'll lay down a bit on the vocal fx on the final version. 😅

For sure I'll PM ya once we finish it! ;)

Thanks again!

Not too shabby. I like unorthodox patterns in songs a lot, but if not done right can make parts sound cluttered.

Is this a joke lol

MusicManSixtyFour responds:

sometime next june

Pretty good little electro track.
Sets a good vibe. Not quite an impressive technical display, but good.

- Synth Clashing
- Weak kick undermined by bass
- Unorthodox/Random noise
- Hardly any transitioning

+ Funky percussion
+ Almost stayed in key

Ultimatepalmtree3 responds:

Thanks for the feedback. This was when I was still relatively new to making music and eJay had its limitations. Mixing it was actually quite tricky but this is the best it's gonna get I'm afraid :)

niiiceee... real nice.

Thank you for stopping by my profile!
I do some music stuff and play games. Haven't been on Newgrounds for a while but I think it will be fun to get back into it.
Feel free to pm me for collabs or just to chat!

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