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I sure do recognize that violin plugin and drum set haha
Keep it up man, you'll get the hang of FL eventually. Try working with the synthesizers to create your own sounds, download some free drum kits and make sure to utilize the mixer to equalize things

Well cool you half baked a single distorted bass loop. Never used LMMS personally so maybe this is really good for what comes out of LMMS.

floriigamer responds:

i really couldn't figure out how to use it so yeah...

Seems cool, kind of reminds me of an old videogame soundtrack for some reason. Listening to this is a little chaotic though, great job using several instruments to fill the space, but I think some of them get off key at points and the piece struggles to keep a single emotion for long.

the beat is extremely repetitive, the whole song actually is. A 4 bar loop it seems for the first 2 minutes. It's okay to be repetitive according the application (IE. soundtracks shouldn't change too much because it's not the main focus) but this song kind of gets annoying after about the 3rd loop of a bar. Keep it up though man, and Happy Birthday!

JackStormYT responds:

Thanks! I'll see how I can make this better

Not too bad man, love the song. The only thing is the instrumentation needs some work, the sounds are a bit out-dated sounding low res. Also the pluck velocity is the same pretty much everytime, change it up a bit.

Sometimes it gets off key as well.

@ 2:06 & 2:53 are the most notable examples.

Keep on a rockin'!

Very enjoyable. All of your synths and sounds are crafted and blend together and a great way. The drum beat is interesting and I love the shuffle.

the transition at 1:33 is awesome, I'm very happy you made it interesting, adjusting the pluck to open up and throwing the drum fill in a unique manner, maybe though, try and add some more background sounds, maybe a sweep or a quick scale on the lead to make the transition more build-up like. People want to hear tension lead into resolution.

CaptainBoomcake responds:

I hear ya, most of my music ends up clustered and with no breathing room, so I wanted to rein it in a bit, but I can see where there may be more room for build up :) thanks

An okay example of the modern genre.
Nothing particularly interesting to see here, but it's a step in the right direction as far as learning your DAW. I can tell you have a grasp on things, using different sounds and different gates. The song itself just doesn't have enough going for it.

More bass slides, more drum patterns, work on mastering the drums and changing velocity more often so it sounds less robotic. A good foundation. Keep it up man.

jiggydmented responds:

It is an older track. More of my newer beats are a bit more dynamic, I'm still learning stuff though

I dig the industrial feeling of the song.
This particular track is bit repetitive to listen to on its own, but as background music or something it's awesome

This track has an excellent vibe.
Masterful work man.

Nervousnoob responds:

Thanks, it means allot!

Very bubbly song I dig it. Chords are jazzy which is nice, for some reason I think of ape escape while listening.

Great work on filling in all the empty space with various sounds, when starting it can be tough to know how to add fx and make the song feel full.

Crazy-Unicorn responds:

Thank you for the feedback!

But conversely, I usually make my songs too full so I try to be lighter now xD

Very experimental.. beat was catchy enough at the start, but by the end the distortion seems like less of a stylistic choice and more earrape joke.

Thank you for stopping by my profile!
I do some music stuff and play games. Haven't been on Newgrounds for a while but I think it will be fun to get back into it.
Feel free to pm me for collabs or just to chat!

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