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The beginning is nice, needs a stronger tune down south (Bass) and those drums gotta be different,
"boom ch boom ch boom ch boom" how bout "boomchbochchchhhh BOOM ch boom boom ch"
Catchin my drift?

ambassadors responds:

Gotcha, thanks!

This is good but the drums or.. Drum XD is repetitive, throw some random tats maybe increase reverb, also there is a balance in melodies, too few & simple = Boreing
Too many & loud = Anoying, this was like.. 1/2 a melodie away from the sweet spot

ambassadors responds:

Honestly I thought Fantasyland was horrible...I was actually about to delete before I read this LOL

hey hey hey man, diggin it, are you new to NG?

Anyway, the sounds should be more crisp and sharp, Good though, do you want me to scout you?

ambassadors responds:

Yeah I'm pretty new to NG :D, please do!
Thanks!

I like that it's clean, and i really enjoyed the beat and rap

lukeclooney... You really.. Hurt my feelings ; - ;

The guitar and lead synth, kind of clash and dont mix properly at times, and the fades or whatever effect happen too often, i really enjoyed that guitar, try tinkering with reverb more

Irtorius responds:

Notes taken :)

The drums do need to be much louder and there is a sound pause, sounds off beat and dont blend toi well, i like the lead synth though

Irtorius responds:

If the pause is that around 0:26~, that was a bass drop, it's a rather low frequency so might be hard to hear :3

The drums is kinda low , need to raise them out of the mud a bit :P
Thanks for the review :)

Love it man, it's just a little repetitive, and it waves out too much

At first i was like, synth?, & then i was like, modded muffle guitar?, then i was like *Face cactus* PIANNOOO, then i was like OMG EARGASMIC NOISES AHHHHH <3 DwNlOaD

Wilhiemthe2nd responds:

Something tells me you liked it

Great song, not sure if it's complextro really, complextro is more like my song "Brix."
And there are some very minor errors like sound lvls & Transitions, & i feel noobie or.. idk since my review is so short

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Thank you for stopping by my profile!
I do some music stuff and play games. Haven't been on Newgrounds for a while but I think it will be fun to get back into it.
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Jahn @Jahn33

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