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Spooky. The synths ( or whatever they are) at the beginning kind of hurt my earzies though.

Wilhiemthe2nd responds:

That can not be... You sure you listened at a healthy volume?
This is the best mix I have ever made. [In my opinion, the Uncompressed version sounds even better, and may fix your issue]

Definitely loving this song. You said it was more in your face but it sounds a little held back to me.
The vocals are a little out of place and stand out but don't blend with the music, and it's the same thing over and over..

OcularNebula responds:

good critique

I am still really bad at mastering, so I'm not entirely sure why it sounds held back (I mean, my compression settings are essentially random most of the time, but I'm sure there are other issues here, too)

5 minutes was perhaps a bit much for this piece, given the repetition - especially the middle (I was initially planning on having more additional layers, and by "planning" I mean I had some vague ideas about what I wanted, but it didn't quite work out)

I feel like I often squander a decent idea by having poor development and iteration, so your feedback makes a lot of sense to me

I like that beginning plucky sound, the kick is a little weak could be more punchy (or if you like it that way so be it) Thank you for not using the same drum loop for 5 minutes. It's simple at the beginning then you spice up very nice very nice. kind of average and quite though.

OcularNebula responds:

yep, always on point

the most frustrating thing is probably having a song like this end up being too quiet

it always feels like a compromise between distorting the initial balance and shape of sounds with post production and the overall punch of a track, though I am actually in no position to be concerned with the "purity" of sounds, just because I don't typically have the level of control required to make a significant difference, but I think I do usually prefer a dryer mix (largely due to laziness)

Sounds a little repetitive. The vocals fit well.

DJMERKEREE responds:

Hey thanks a lot man, honestly the acapella was edited well enough that there wasn't too much warping required, just finding the right key.

Not a big fan of industrial music so my review might be a bit ehhh but IF I did like industrial music I guess this song would be cool.. Me myself likes the lyrics, except when you yell.

Spoonukem responds:

There's a wide range in Industrial, and this song is really pushing it. Bottom line, it's very experimental. The ending with the screaming is probably the only real Industrial thing about this song, sadly. False advertising a bit, but... eh. I don't like genres.

Thanks for the review nonetheless! >:D

The loop repeats itself within the loop XD
Not something I would listen to all the time but would be nice background music for a game or party or just hangout.

Kinda spooky... Like the beat but the background sounds make it seem like an ambient song. Be good in a video game.

Verry simple, very creative. It's good to express your feelings in music. I'm happy for you two.

Genraltweet responds:

Aw, thanks! :D Music is the best way to express yourself when you find no words to say

:) Who knew re had a sound? Cant say anything that hasn't already been said. Me gusta

Cant say it's my favourit sung... It's like 2 sounds battleing baq and forth.
Cant say it's the worst ever though...

Might want an equipment upgrade *cough cough no more club create how about fl studio cough*

EnNinja responds:

Doesn't have a PC yet but soon :/

Thank you for stopping by my profile!
I do some music stuff and play games. Haven't been on Newgrounds for a while but I think it will be fun to get back into it.
Feel free to pm me for collabs or just to chat!

Jahn @Jahn33

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