It's ok. Keep at it.
It's ok. Keep at it.
Definitely belongs in a video game.
That's some high quality stuff right there. I feel the wobble saw that comes in at about a minute is a little rough sounding for the song. It just gets stronger throughout and feels out of place. Tried a little too much to make the song "go hard"
Thanks, I strive to improve c:
Sounds like a pretty cookie cutter nightcore mix. Hints of NES sonic? Ah well it's appropriate for how things were 8 years ago.
Wow, this has some huge potential. The intro has such a natural flow that shouts HIT TRANCE VIBE. I really appreciate the collab with a singer. She's got a pretty nice voice, from what I can tell, but you sure did go heavy on those fx. There's a couple parts that could stand to be re-recorded though where it doesn't quite match up.
Note* At 5:50 I'd either let it ring out a bit longer, or have it cut faster the amount of time feels awkward.
Can't wait to hear it finished
Thank you for the review my friend! I see what you are talking about at 5:50 I believe it's because the vocal doesn't fall in time quite right so it feels off. Indeed we need to re-record some bits :)
I'll lay down a bit on the vocal fx on the final version. 😅
For sure I'll PM ya once we finish it! ;)
Thanks again!
Not too shabby. I like unorthodox patterns in songs a lot, but if not done right can make parts sound cluttered.
Is this a joke lol
sometime next june
Pretty good little electro track.
Sets a good vibe. Not quite an impressive technical display, but good.
- Synth Clashing
- Weak kick undermined by bass
- Unorthodox/Random noise
- Hardly any transitioning
+ Funky percussion
+ Almost stayed in key
Thanks for the feedback. This was when I was still relatively new to making music and eJay had its limitations. Mixing it was actually quite tricky but this is the best it's gonna get I'm afraid :)
niiiceee... real nice.
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