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I like the underdome kick that hones in, seems verry chill with the lows yet upbeat with the highs, those hats seem a little loud and sort of annoy me. I feel like it builds up supremely then just dies at the end. Not sure if this is a wip or the finished one? So..

R3SP4WN's a good guy. I will admit ( publicly as reviews cant be undone ) i should have been more constructive crit and less hate.

Down to buisness this is a great improvement. I still feel the bass drowned out the melody. I like the minamalstic style though. EQ could be tweaked for ballence of the sounds.

Enjoyed the chill end at around 1:50.

The bass sounds broken and to sluggish. Sounds like a speaker throwing up. Sorry.

Barrellaj responds:

no apology necessary. I agree, and I've had trouble eqing everything in this one. theres a lot going on, it's hard to get all the levels right

Nice piano solo.

Evermourne responds:

Thank you very much :)

I don't know how i feel either. (Fair average song)

0:56 was great! Your getting better. Bring out the drums a bit in this one, they are kind of drowning.

HE IS!!! GEZZUSS CHROIST i like this song

Holy cow balls those drums come right out of no-where at 00:17
Might want to try and bring those in a little more softly.

The synthase that come in around at 0:30 are nice, fits very good.
This is one of your better songs in my opinion :)
You did a great job!

The kick is wimpy, and basically the whole drum/percussion is almost missing.
Not a spectacular new think. Good average song.

R3SP4WN responds:

Yeah I agree with the kicks. I tried to stretch the time on it to make it go longer and it took away from the snap of the kick.

But I don't agree with the drums missing, while parts of it were lower than they should have been, they were definitely there.

I feel like the drums should have come in a little early and your kick is kinda weak. Like the bass though!

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Jahn @Jahn33

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