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Trying to decide if I read it like manga right to left or Comic left to right. Lol it makes sense either way.

PigLice responds:

Oh yeah this page layout wasnt the most clear at the top but it is left to right

Bacon boy

Epic

rip

Art is super cool as far as character style and LOVE the color. Only thing is some of the scenes have an odd perspective, things seem a little warped or off balance and it can be hard to orientate yourself to view the scene. (#5 middle panel was the most obvious example of that)

Also I think there's a handful of typos throughout. (#7 "Everyone I have ever meet" *met & "That's a few to many" *too)

Other than those little gripes dope comic.

SkyHawkins responds:

Thank you so much for the in-depth feedback!
Going forward I’ll try to pay more attention to the perspective. I’ll get to work on fixing typos as well.
The colors are one of my favorite aspects of the project. Tropical_Bird did a phenomenal job making the palettes!
Happy to hear you enjoyed the comic overall

nice lovin' it

I'm getting a vibe that's like an extreme high budget version of those Cartoon Network shows, Total Drama Island / (newer) Ben10 / Samurai Jack / etc. you know what im talkin about?
All in all super cool.

Very cool, dunno what it's from or if it's original but looks dope. Blood mage? fire mage? idk battle priest even.
Rock on

Sheabudder responds:

It's an original! Why not both Bloodfire mage.

Nice love the style of being slightly blocky/geometric/isometric/parametric/making-these-up-imetric.

all in all dope

Love the style, love the name

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Jahn @Jahn33

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