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Same here, heard it from Steve run. Though your song deserves to be in a better game it did get you lots of positive comments!!

Jolly good show, though the kick is verry baisic it's what makes house-house right? I like that it changes up every once in a while to keep it interesting. The ending made me giggle for some reason, idk im weird, good song though, cant say it's the best I have ever heard, but if all songs were perfect what would we do without the need for improvement ( Correct me if i'm wrong )

P.S. It dose loop pretty fine, accident? Probably, ive had it happen.

BTW: Sorry this wasn't exactly helpful, i'll try harder next time.

OcularNebula responds:

well, you're right about the kick

yeah, the ending was kinda fun and different, huh? I was initially looking for an instrument that would be somehow evocative of birds for that extra bit of melody, but instead I ended up with this?!?!?

I really enjoy the level of modesty in your critique, and yes, you are certainly correct in that we always have plenty of room to improve our skills, no matter the craft - it's probably one of the more interesting aspects of pursuing anything creative - the ability to gradually improve and notice the effect(s) it has on your work!

as for the looping, I typically cut off my endings at an even amount of measures with some *'verb n' 'lay* still trailing, so it sometimes ends up looping well :p

looking forward to more reviews from you!

Makes me think of a spy from TF2, I like your lil vocal clips you put in your songs! They be like the cherry on top of some awesome icecream. If you ever want a vocal clip but cant find one, hit me up and I'll make one free, or if your like batman thats cool too.

TheBiocide responds:

Hehehehehe, seriously appreciate the offer, dude - I'll keep it in mind!

Cheers!!!

Great for a song made on Clubcreate, but you should probably think about getting some real music software + Hardware. It's a little repetitive and sudden.. But what can you? Listen to my club creates then listen to my real stuff. BIG diff

EnNinja responds:

Thanks for the review! I am going to buy a PC and after that get FL studio. That has been in my mind since this summer so… yeah.

Everythin Wilhiemthe2nd said hits it. EXEPT I like the piano, it does end a bit quickly and should probably been placed behind the massive synths which could be toned down due to the fact it drowned the drums. The intro was supah hecka nice, along with the eye of the storm.

You done good here.
p.s. i belive i deserve at least .05% credit for the crit on soundCloud :) jfk

R3SP4WN responds:

Thanks man!

Someone spiked the tune guys

As micky D's slogan. Bada ba da buh i'm diggin this

Heyyy nice nice, liken FL11? OH N' btw if you want a voice clip for the drop i'm lookin 4 somethin 2 do ;)

R3SP4WN responds:

I'm LOVING FL11! It's pretty great!

I like the original one a little more, STILL a great remix c:

And well , _ , even if this song dosnt get blown up like the last one... Can you still upload music, please :3

Thank you for stopping by my profile!
I do some music stuff and play games. Haven't been on Newgrounds for a while but I think it will be fun to get back into it.
Feel free to pm me for collabs or just to chat!

Jahn @Jahn33

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Joined on 11/3/12

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